Copywriting Comparison

by Joey on June 24, 2010

in Splyce Media Group

Written Content is Just as Important as Design

We would like to stress the importance of good copy for your website. Just how good photography can change the feel of a website, so can the written content.

At Splyce Media Group, we encourage all of our clients to have their website content written by a professional copywriter. Here is an example of the difference between an average blog post and one that has been rewritten by an experienced copywriter. Notice how much easier it is to follow along and absorb the message.

Original Blog Post

If you have a Monthly Maintenance Plan, Help Desk Support  Plan or other computer service contract with E-Geniuses, then you already know that what our technicians can do remotely.

There are still people out there that think that when they have a computer problem they have 2 choices:

1) They have to take it into a shop
2) They can call a technician to go on site.

What they might not already know is that many times there is a 3rd option.

3) Have a technician fix the problem over the Internet.
Online Computer Services

Online computer services saves time, hassle and money. Yes money too.

When a technician goes on site, they can only work on 1 computer at a time. When they are working remotely, they can work on multiple computers (e.g. while waiting for a scan to finish.) Most computer service companies charge a higher rate when they are on site compared to being remote.

Online computer service is not new. The technology has been out there for a while now. Online computer support becomes more convenient as our Internet Connection speeds continue to increase.

If you know someone who is having a problem with their computer, have them give us a call. As long as they’re computer can go online, we can perform computer diagnostics remotely.

Here is the rewritten content

Online Computer Services

Let us change your mind about how easy computer service can be.

Ask anyone who’s paid for traditional computer services with one of E-Geniuses’ competitors, and without fail, they’ll tell you about the nuisance—making a trip out to the shop to deliver a computer, or waiting at home for a technician who turned out to be late, incompetent, or rude.

E-Geniuses’ Monthly Maintenance Plan and Help Desk Support Plans eliminate these worries: no more driving or waiting. Our highly-skilled technicians can fix most any computer problem remotely that other technicians can only do in person—saving you the time and the headache.

It is our humble opinion that not enough of the public is aware that Online Computer Services are an option, and with its superior convenience and growing availability, we feel they should. Your computer is an essential part of your everyday life, and having them repaired shouldn’t feel like a chore.

Online Computer Services

You already know how our Online Computer Services save you time, energy, and hassle—but here’s something you may not know: it saves you money. Most computer service companies charge extra for appearing on-site. But why would you spend more for an on-site technician, when your problem could just as easily be addressed remotely?

E-Geniuses Technicians working remotely can fix multiple computers at once (e.g. removing malware on one computer while running a scan on another), while on-site technicians can only service one computer at a time, costing you more and taking up more of your day.

Though Online Computer Service is not a brand new technology, it is constantly improving. The faster the internet connection, the better our services to you: and at E-Geniuses, that’s of the utmost importance.

If you or someone you know is having problems with a laptop or computer, give us a call at 1-877-MY-GENIUS today and see if Online Computer Services are right for you!

The original post was not bad, but there is definitely a difference in how the rewritten post reads. One of the main problems we see with the content our clients give to us is consistency. Some content may come from a brochure written 5 years ago, some from a white paper written by someone in the technical department. A professional copywriter will be able to combine information from different sources in a way that makes them sound consistent.

Another aspect of copywriting for the web is the Search Engine Optimization (SEO) factor. Our copywriters make sure that the content can be found on the major search engines based on keywords that will convert to serve your purpose.

If you are interested in our copy-writing services, give us a call at (877) 4-SPLYCE.

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